I think there is a something little weird......
I try to fix it, but it still looks weird...
Can somebody point that weird place?
sheet:
![[Image: sakiwip.png]](http://img144.imageshack.us/img144/7346/sakiwip.png)
CG picture:
![[Image: sakist.png]](http://img361.imageshack.us/img361/6387/sakist.png)
I think it looks great, but there are two weird places.
1: The right arm looks deformed. I recommend changing it so that it is held in a boxer's stance while jabbing. You could reference Muhammad Ali because he had a tendency to keep his hands at his side as opposed to his face.
2: The left leg should not buckle in during the punch. It should bend in the other direction somewhat.
Aside from these two criticisms, I think it is awesome!
No it isn't great...
you recolored the hair and didn't run of the original style, the CG Art have a strange coloring, and the lineart isn't that great...
And Caergrim, nothing is great when you have these errors that you said... .-.
Twice the size of her torso according to the ref. :o