Pretty Sure I have it fixed now, at the very least, they're less jumpy:
I think it could use more frames, and the idle looks odd to me. It seems like his torso is just shifting back and forth without the rest of his plat (?) changing shape despite them being attached.
Actually, I don't think he needs more frames, just his stance is too extreme (his upper half moves too far) give the upper-torso half less movement but the same amount of frames. Other than that I think it looks excellent.
I think I see what you guys are saying (At least about the Torso moving to far forward)
App, by 'plat' do you mean the Orange Part of the body that has it's 'Crystal' in the Center? If so, I'm actually trying to fix that now, no idea why it changes shape like that
I meant his plate, you have his torso swinging back and forth but his crotch plate remains perfectly still despite that it looks like it should move along with it. Also, the leg movement is kind of cheap
He has knees yes? Make them bend as he bends down
Oh man, I can't believe I forgot about his Crotch plate! I'll fix that now too, and same with the legs (again, for no reason, they change shape, and I'll make them bend too)
I'll probably split that Animation into 3 separate ones next time, since the one you guys are looking it came out to 78 Frames...that way it'll save time if there's more errors that I need to fixed
Fixed (I think...) :
I noticed that the Shading's a little jumpy on the Close leg, I'll fix that...And the leg itself Jerks forward...I'll fix that too
Also, I made his Crotch Plate bend with him now, and mad him move slightly less forward (Only a pixel, but it seems to work)
And I might make the 'Crystal' in his chest a little bigger because the torso seems empty, IMO
Once all these Fixes are done, I'm going to Start the Attack Form
The leg closest to us wobbles in a different direction during his idle. It feels like both his torso and his legs are swinging him lower, but it does not feel like a natural idle imo. I dunno what to do with him or suggest :/
Ok, I think I fixed everything...The leg doesn't wabble anymore, it actually resembles bending:
But, I dunno how to make it feel like a natural Idle...
I kinda like they way it is now.
plz josh could u make me a luxio & vulpix sprite sheet
(02-14-2010, 05:10 PM)rowanthewolf10 Wrote: [ -> ]plz josh could u make me a luxio & vulpix sprite sheet
Um don't ask him to he will get to them eventually. Just be patient he doesn't take requests.
Deoxys is Finally done:
I'm trying to look for any small errors I may have missed, but almost everything animates perfectly, so it may take a while (If there are any errors to fix)
Hopefully, my next remake won't take as long as this sheet did...I know I said I wouldn't give hints for remakes, but...The next Pokemon up for remake is not only obtainable in G/S/C and HG/SS, but is also obtainable in XD. When Purified in XD, it's the only Pokemon other than Deoxys to have Psycho Boost (Unless Smeargle can sketch it, then include him too)...And it also learns Aeroblast