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any good?

Should be in Sprite Discussion, not submissions.

Anyway: The light source seems odd - normally you'd expect it to be in front of Kirby, possibly above him, rather than being behind and below him.

Unless you're specifically aiming for a primitive style, I'd say you need to fix up the sprite, in terms of some anti-aliasing, perhaps removing the solid black outline (depending on the style), and creating some more frames for things like his walking animation.

Waaaay too basic to be accepted, although you're off to a decent start.

Moved to Sprite Discussion.

+1 for attempt at custom sprites.