I get the feeling no one's looking at these.
critique please?
PLEASE?!
I guess it looks good, since no one is commenting on your work... I think.
I didn't know your character was huge compared to Sonic: it wasn't like that in your older avatar
not that I don't like it, though.
The hi-res tail set you have in your sheet looks pillow shaded. Also, his right leg (the one far from us) is overlapping his left one (the one near us). I don't know, but I find your character kinda distracting because of all his details.
the woman body is good. I could say you could change her feet's positioning, but since it's like a char ref, it's good as it is.
(07-24-2009, 08:48 AM)*Gorsal* Wrote: [ -> ]I guess it looks good, since no one is commenting on your work... I think.
I didn't know your character was huge compared to Sonic: it wasn't like that in your older avatar not that I don't like it, though.
The hi-res tail set you have in your sheet looks pillow shaded. Also, his right leg (the one far from us) is overlapping his left one (the one near us). I don't know, but I find your character kinda distracting because of all his details.
the woman body is good. I could say you could change her feet's positioning, but since it's like a char ref, it's good as it is.
XD It's for a MMO Game I'm working on. As for the pillow shady part. I'll fix that the next update.
for now here's what I have for this one.
http://www.majhost.com/gallery/TurboThun...ething.png
It still has a pillow shady tail.
Edit: In my old Avy Sonic was jumping up behind people. That's why he looked taller.
that looks good, but seeing it again, the female body's breasts might be a bit too large.
(07-27-2009, 10:29 PM)*Gorsal* Wrote: [ -> ]that looks good, but seeing it again, the female body's breasts might be a bit too large.
Hmmm... I'll take a look at it then.
...Improve to 3D-ish deph?
giving some perspective on them. make the foot fixed in different heights instead of putting them in the same height.
(09-26-2009, 08:17 PM)*Gorsal* Wrote: [ -> ]giving some perspective on them. make the foot fixed in different heights instead of putting them in the same height.
Ah. Now I know what to do.
Thank you very much.
You all thought I was gone for good now didn't ya.
http://www.majhost.com/gallery/TurboThun...emrk3l.png
I bring new stuff. The last base I worked on turned out to be more work than I intended. So I started this one.
Critiques or comments on these? Or something to show that you saw this. I'll even accept 'It sucks worse than anything I've ever seen' comments as long as they give me a way to improve.
I think the blue would look better if it was a little lighter in colour.