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Yes Platinum is Dawn's manga name.

Anyway I completed all 3, thanks to those who helped on Pearl. More comments would be nice before I submit these on art sites.

That is great, do you plan on making a Dia/Lucas to match?

Yes I do, I actually started him before pearl but I decided to finish pearl instead.

Looks amazing Jar, as usual. I always did like your styles, they're simple and clean. This one style is one of my favs.
Honestly, I don't think there is anything needed to be improved. I was gonna say his neck shouldn't be covered as much but since it looks like he is leaning forward a bit while walking, it's acceptable to have it covered.

Alright thanks, I guess I'll just move on and finish Diamond.

Looks pretty great, the only thing I see 'wrong' with him is his left cheek seems too chubby, but that might just be part of the Style...

edited because the dark spot i put there to prevent that wasnt dark enough

Looks better! Can't wait for Dia/Lucas

added lucas, edited dawn and barry too.

Looks great, nice work.

I can't quite put my finger on it, but I think Lucas' Left arm (Our Right) is positioned a little awkwardly... Maybe try to angle it forward a little more...

Other than that, they're great!

I had a strong feeling the arm was off because it was bothering me a bit still, but then I took a good long look at the artwork and figured a solution:

Seriously though these are really nice.

Those eyes are really creepy, especially Pearl's.

I wouldn't expect them to all have the same eye-shape, either.

edited their eyes, and the shape of each is slightly different to match each one's expression better, and added more color and shading in them.

anything else or am i done?