07-13-2009, 03:41 PM
07-13-2009, 04:06 PM
hmm, her face looks messy: there are a lot of stray pixels there. Some of the colors clash, principally red. I think it should be paler so it goes well with other colors. Also, some parts, especially the legs, are jaggy.
The way she swings the sword is unnatural and the motion blur could be better; Antialiase it and remove the outlines.
The way she swings the sword is unnatural and the motion blur could be better; Antialiase it and remove the outlines.
07-13-2009, 05:28 PM
*I'm going to do the animation again, looking at ToL, it's completely wrong.*
Anyway, does this look better?
Anyway, does this look better?
07-14-2009, 09:24 AM
that blade looks way too jagged. unless its a schimitar.