The VG Resource

You sir need to work on your lineart. It looks jagged and abnormal in some places. However, your shading is up to par.

methinks the metals need more contrast. otherwise the shading is good.


but what's up with his left arm? :I

i'm not really working on the lineart (sorry for excuses heh) because ive never really shaded something metallic well.... so thats what i want to focus on