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(08-11-2009, 10:52 AM)Comix Wrote: [ -> ]
(08-03-2009, 08:48 AM)ZeroTwo Wrote: [ -> ]WAIT

SOMEONE WRITING A REAL NARRATIVE

OH MY GOD

I DON'T EVEN CARE IF IT'S GOOD KUDOS TO YOU GOOD SIR.


(08-03-2009, 08:48 AM)ZeroTwo Wrote: [ -> ]it's not very good

umm...
Shhhhhhhh.
(08-10-2009, 03:27 AM)(TSON) Wrote: [ -> ]"the grunts and moans of men, the screaming of woman and children"

Sexy~

Too bad the rest of it was totally cliche and unreadable. That might have made it a lot better. Try erotic fanfiction next time. Perhaps with dragons too.

Well, I don't write for porn freaks or Mills & Boons fans...
I wan two more opinions at least before I listen to you. No offence, you might be a great guy and all, but yeah... o_O Death and disaster is not sexy...

(08-11-2009, 11:08 AM)Tyvon Wrote: [ -> ]
(08-11-2009, 10:52 AM)Comix Wrote: [ -> ]
(08-03-2009, 08:48 AM)ZeroTwo Wrote: [ -> ]WAIT

SOMEONE WRITING A REAL NARRATIVE

OH MY GOD

I DON'T EVEN CARE IF IT'S GOOD KUDOS TO YOU GOOD SIR.


(08-03-2009, 08:48 AM)ZeroTwo Wrote: [ -> ]it's not very good

umm...
Shhhhhhhh.

Umm...?
(08-11-2009, 10:52 AM)Comix Wrote: [ -> ]
(08-03-2009, 08:48 AM)ZeroTwo Wrote: [ -> ]WAIT

SOMEONE WRITING A REAL NARRATIVE

OH MY GOD

I DON'T EVEN CARE IF IT'S GOOD KUDOS TO YOU GOOD SIR.


(08-03-2009, 08:48 AM)ZeroTwo Wrote: [ -> ]it's not very good

umm...
Not exactly an emotion filled opinion rather a statement.
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