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Beagal's version is a lot less creepy-looking and a lot more 't-shirt design'-like.

I'd reccomend going for a similar line-drawing look. And ditch the oversized, staring eyes you're using. *shudder*

Yeah I actually like it. I'll try it out.

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Better?

the eyes dont match with the bird. I think the notes should go down more two. Maybe also if he doesnt look right at you, too.

Oh ok. I'll try it out. I don't how to really make the eyes look good. I think the other eyes look better but the could be a little smaller.

*edit*
Better?


I don't know why the eyes look so creepy

try making him face more like this



Obviously with more effort, but this is just an idea. I was too lazy to add the music

Oh ok. is the music ok now?

looks okay to me.

Awesome here's the latest version:

Tried doing what you told me.

*edit*
Worked a little more on the shading of the clouds cause I liked how Baegel's clouds looked.

Hope you like!

seems like the beak could be smaller to me, and the bird could be more circular, but it does look better to me

Oh ok awesome. I'll try and do that.

Better?

Yes, actually. That looks much better.

Any ideas on how to improve it?

I like that one much more. Try rounding out the eyes, since everything else is rounded, and making them shorter

Oh ok. That's awesome. I'll do it later.

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Done? I hope you like it. Is it finished? Anything I should add?

Is it done?