10-23-2009, 02:06 PM
10-23-2009, 02:16 PM
(10-23-2009, 01:49 PM)mutantyoshi Wrote: [ -> ]this better for Luigi?
I love Yoshi =D
I've made Ness in the new style. Is my first time doing character in this style...
I've used Mario's colours ^^
10-23-2009, 02:23 PM
(10-22-2009, 11:02 PM)koopaul Wrote: [ -> ]I did a real minor edit to your Olimar... And to Mario again, sorry couldn't help it.
I think the original Olimar looks a lot nicer and fits the style better. :\
10-23-2009, 02:34 PM
(10-23-2009, 01:10 PM)Brawler1207 Wrote: [ -> ]Yeah Fox's head is kinda leaning forward a little bit.
I actually did that on purpose. Though I do know something else does look odd about him. I can't figure out exactly what it is. It could be the fact I used Mario's white, instead of using something with more yellow in it.
You'd think I'd have him down, after so many tries at him...
@mutantyoshi, you want to move Luigi's ear forward, and show a bit of the back of Luigi's head.
@koopaul, I'm agreeing with Arthur.
Finally, just how cartoony are we going for here? The way I did Fox's hands, is that acceptable?
10-23-2009, 02:35 PM
(10-23-2009, 02:16 PM)JoseFran Wrote: [ -> ]Ness looks pretty bad, it looks like you relied too hard on the old sprite.(10-23-2009, 01:49 PM)mutantyoshi Wrote: [ -> ]this better for Luigi?
I love Yoshi =D
I've made Ness in the new style. Is my first time doing character in this style...
I've used Mario's colours ^^
10-23-2009, 02:42 PM
(10-23-2009, 02:35 PM)Number Six Wrote: [ -> ](10-23-2009, 02:16 PM)JoseFran Wrote: [ -> ]Ness looks pretty bad, it looks like you relied too hard on the old sprite.(10-23-2009, 01:49 PM)mutantyoshi Wrote: [ -> ]this better for Luigi?
I love Yoshi =D
I've made Ness in the new style. Is my first time doing character in this style...
I've used Mario's colours ^^
Yes, you're right, I've looking at the old sprite a lot, maybe I must change it
10-23-2009, 03:47 PM
Sploder: "@kirbyfan, you have Kirby's mouth too low. Bring it up to just below his cheeks. You might also need to enlarge his eyes and cheeks a tiny bit."
Yeah. I told you, I messed up on the face big time. I'll make a new face when I'm done with the new size.
Pink - Height and Height Ratio
Red - Ground and Height
Blue - Actually area they stand on
Orange - Correct height for Kirby
So basically, a circle going from the orange line to two pixels above the blue line (so Kirby's body), doesn't look good, so I went one pixel up.
Again, I failed miserably and the face (obviously used the old one for reference), and pretty badly on the shading. Also, now looking at it, I think his arms may be too big? Opinions?
Yeah. I told you, I messed up on the face big time. I'll make a new face when I'm done with the new size.
Pink - Height and Height Ratio
Red - Ground and Height
Blue - Actually area they stand on
Orange - Correct height for Kirby
So basically, a circle going from the orange line to two pixels above the blue line (so Kirby's body), doesn't look good, so I went one pixel up.
Again, I failed miserably and the face (obviously used the old one for reference), and pretty badly on the shading. Also, now looking at it, I think his arms may be too big? Opinions?
10-23-2009, 04:48 PM
the lines are a bit sketchy but looks good otherwise
10-23-2009, 05:28 PM
Sorry another edit from me... Why do I keep doing this?
10-23-2009, 06:06 PM
(10-23-2009, 05:28 PM)koopaul Wrote: [ -> ]Sorry another edit from me... Why do I keep doing this?
I think his nose is too big, thats my only thing about it.
EDIT: I decided to edit it
Better (my newer one is at the end)
10-23-2009, 06:09 PM
Head:
The left one seems better.
http://www.wiisworld.com/images/news/brawl/yoshi-1.jpg
See. Not quite a full circle.
Limbs:
The left is better, but the right matches the style correctly.
Stomach, Tail, Shell:
Left is better.
The left one seems better.
http://www.wiisworld.com/images/news/brawl/yoshi-1.jpg
See. Not quite a full circle.
Limbs:
The left is better, but the right matches the style correctly.
Stomach, Tail, Shell:
Left is better.
10-23-2009, 06:18 PM
this better, newer one is the right one.
10-23-2009, 06:20 PM
I agree.
10-23-2009, 06:33 PM
I prefer the middle one. The longer nose looks better, while the shorter nose looks squished.
10-23-2009, 06:35 PM
i like the right one