(07-19-2010, 12:50 AM)Le Spriter Wrote: [ -> ]Tried a little something
Where's his neck?
(07-19-2010, 12:50 AM)Le Spriter Wrote: [ -> ]Tried a little something
where's the anatomy and why's he looking at the camera
(07-19-2010, 01:28 AM)ThePoopPupu Wrote: [ -> ]Where's his neck?
Hidden by the scarf.
(07-19-2010, 01:34 AM)Alpha Six Wrote: [ -> ]where's the anatomy
...I don't get what you're asking for.
I'm asking for you to make the anatomy not-bad
legs don't bend like that, the body has no shape and some of the shading/colors are bad
(07-19-2010, 01:40 AM)Le Spriter Wrote: [ -> ] (07-19-2010, 01:28 AM)ThePoopPupu Wrote: [ -> ]Where's his neck?
Hidden by the scarf.
(07-19-2010, 01:34 AM)Alpha Six Wrote: [ -> ]where's the anatomy
...I don't get what you're asking for.
Thats no excuse for no neck, his head seems to be precariously balanced upon his shoulders.
shading isn't perfect but i prefer to be sure I have the right stance before putting investment in it.
Structure and anatomy issues all over the place. It looks like he doesn't have a crotch and his legs look broken. Those arms are in an incredibly awkward position.
You should practice structure and anatomy a lot more.
I see :/
well does the head looks right ?
also, I simply took Isaac's stance ingame. Didn't know what position to put.
Head looks alright. Some of the black inside of the hair doesn't need to belong though-- color over that.
Is any of these two upper bodies good ? :I
Sorry for the few contribuition, but mine internet has gone and i can't get the updates so fast T.T
If someone could redo the head, i will be very thankfull.
A step in the right direction.
(08-19-2010, 06:50 AM)Raid Wrote: [ -> ]Sorry for the few contribuition, but mine internet has gone and i can't get the updates so fast T.T
If someone could redo the head, i will be very thankfull.
You Win!
My first sprite in over a year. Heavily inspired by Raid's, and almost all colors are picked from it (I assume they're from the project's palette).
It probably sucks and I won't be able to animate it, but I'm just excited to have sprited something
Pretty solid. The face needs a bit more definition/separation from the hair, but it's very nice.