So yeah. It's a pirahna plant.

I'm always looking to improve my spriting so any sort of critique or helpful hint would be really appreciated.

i think the mouth should have a black outline,*good job with the shading though*

Good job, but I think you could improve it like this:



Bigger lips.

Correct anti-aliasing.

Altered palette to have slightly more contrast and saturation.

Reduced colours on pot to add to the contrast.

Added some slightly more detailed shading to the pot.

Made the head slightly more circular.

(05-13-2009, 04:13 PM)Spudmeister Wrote:

So yeah. It's a pirahna plant.

I'm always looking to improve my spriting so any sort of critique or helpful hint would be really appreciated.

ya the mouth needs an outline and in places where the outline is away from the light it needs to be a tad darker.
I was thinking if you made those white spots into spikes it would loo pretty cool but overall good work.