also i was making this yesterday for an obvious person


this was a couple days ago for a silly joke-y fun

Ooh, sequel to the Aforcer game, that'll be cool

Cute stuff I guess?

(05-20-2009, 05:51 PM)Champion Shawn Wrote:

Changed this a bunch with the help of some crits from Arachne.

Big improvement on the face, start sorting out the body now pls :E

I keep having to talk about boobs on this forum! Let me do it some more: that v-shaped cleavage makes no sense! To get that shape the boob'd have to be shaped like a rotated oval and they'd be like... conjoined across the middle
gross!
Literally all you need to do is remove that weird v shape and they'll look much more believable.

Boobs are literally just sacks of fat. Draw them like it.

Her whole torso seems kind of high? Like her shoulders are paper thin! move everything from the collarbone downwards some and reshape the shoulders to fit. If she were real, the space from her shoulder muscle to her armpit would probably be an inch or so. Obviously you're not going for realism but it still needs messing with to make it more convincing.

Sorry to sound so fuckin anal but these are pretty quick fixes that'd improve this drastically.

If you finish this up to the same kind of quality as the face it'll genuinely be professional-quality stuff DO IT DO IT REACH FOR THE STARS

You kiddies and your gorgeous, detailed criticism really make me wanna finish this.



I tried fixing the torso as best I could. How is it?

But boobs are hott sacks of fat.

Anyway, can't really give critisim for the girl because I don't know female anatomy all that well but it still looks good to be. Seems to be a generic anime body so it passes to me.

The first sprite reminds me of one of Marty's styles lol. Still looks awesome and I love the last sprite.
Great job you beast.

EDIT: Okay the new one looks alot better anatomically.(not even sure if this is even a word). It makes my pants tight.

Waaaaay better! It's got a better sense of weight now.
Nothing else is really jumping out at me atm, carry on~ :>

wip

i am trying to do that Animu AA, but pixelart anime is fucking hard :/

(05-20-2009, 07:27 PM)Star/Starpower Wrote: I don't know female anatomy all that well.

Watch some porns

(05-20-2009, 08:22 PM)Champion Shawn Wrote:

wip

Awesome, But I think the Arms & Hair should move just a bit because if you look closer, The Legs kind of seem out of place when the rest doesn't move.

i said it's a wip. :- (

i always start with the legs when making running anims

actually, it look way more stylish as it is now.

river ransom-ish.

ehhhhhhhhhh

shawn you really do need to make a game or something