(07-23-2009, 04:31 PM)Zenaki Wrote:

Any better ?
And I still don't know which eyes to choose, so if you could please help me.

You're welcome, Epic'.

right. I like right better.

I would say the head thats already on it. The disembodied one looks like its cross-eyed

I agree; the first one is much better.

(07-23-2009, 04:52 PM)Smash Wrote:

(07-23-2009, 02:53 PM)Mr. Jaks Wrote:
Better?

The shadesare wrongly placed on pidgeot, mostly. I'd recommend extending the brighter shade of the belly all way down, shortening the darker shades. Lapras, for instance, shows a good example of how it should be.

Quilava looks somewhat deformed, the problem dating back to the original lines.. I think it needs to be redone entirely, with more curves and longer body.

Why thank you for such criticism.
I have to re-do both of the quilava's right?

k abra is done. he might be a little taller than 2 ft 11 though. thanks to epicwes for helping me get the hang of it. =D

Abra looks odd. It's not nearly fat enough and its pose (and general lineart) is awkward.

abra isnt THAT fat.... though it would help to make the sprite a bit less thin. If you expained how the line art was akward i might be able to fix, but im going on vacation for three days, so i wont be able to get on it right away.

My attempt to make it look more detailed, Before i start with the body.

Line's looking great so far, but you don't need to size-chart Steelix since he's built of individual parts.

With Pokemon like Wailord, it might be easy to build them through tiles, but I'm not sure yet.

I'm 100% sure I'm gonna finish that Steelix...

I may have gotten a little over my head with it, I'm not as good as most of you here.

Minor edits, mainly on the fur and I tried to uncross the eyes of the face on the right because actually I was more asking about the "location" ( not sure if it's the correct word for that ) of the eyes. On the left, it's like it looks like on some sprites and on the right, they are closer to the crest, more like on the artwork.

And imo, it didn't really fit the style and even if I do suck at choosing colors and at fitting style, which makes my opinion worthless, I brightened colors a bit. Yeah, thats stupid.

If anybody does want to make Aggron or Shiftry go ahead, im a very slow/lazy spriter...

These in style? Colors from Jak's Pikachu.

Also, I love the Arcanine.

Tried Umbreon. I took the colors from official sprites and will change them later.

Medevenx I think someone did hime allready

Zenaki, umbreon might be a little bulky.