Ive just recently started workining on a zelda game and ive made only two characters the bokoblins and the first dungeon boss im going to put them up can you guys plz tell me what you think....




i like them but i want them to match the link im using im using a link thats made by black boo here it is



what do you guys/girls think?

hmm....maybe for the first one, you could make the second shade in the purple only AA the darkest shade to make it look less pillowy. The darkest shade on the hat looks too close to black, make it lighter. The shading also looks a little blocky in some areas. and it might need more contrast.
The second one needs bit more contrast between shades. Black Boo is also using sel-out while your not.

The lineart seems fine, though.

(09-13-2009, 10:24 AM)Baegal Wrote: hmm....maybe for the first one, you could make the second shade in the purple only AA the darkest shade to make it look less pillowy. The darkest shade on the hat looks too close to black, make it lighter. The shading also looks a little blocky in some areas. and it might need more contrast.
The second one needs bit more contrast between shades. Black Boo is also using sel-out while your not.

The lineart seems fine, though.

okay thanks, I tried the skull what do you guy/girls think of this .....and now the bokoblin still need more advice on how to get this to match his

I also did these but the walking animations arent that good if anyone can fix that i would be very greatful

i still think the purple should have sel-out, not be pillowshaded. The jewel on the hat is good, but there still isnt enough shading on the hat. Howver, the skull itself looks pretty well. There should also be more AA and shading on the hat, and more CONTRAST. Use some sel-out too.

The thing at the bottom looks good, but i cant make animated sprites well, so i cant help you with that

What do you guys/girls think of this do you think these are good enough for tsr

I like them, very good. Add some kind of attacking sprite and lighten up the shading just a little and it's perfect.

(09-16-2009, 07:33 AM)ProtoTroid X Wrote: I like them, very good. Add some kind of attacking sprite and lighten up the shading just a little and it's perfect.

how bout now?

It looks fantastic. It's not a big edit, but it's a useful one. Haven't seen many customs of them, so I give you thumbs up.

(09-17-2009, 07:08 AM)ProtoTroid X Wrote: It looks fantastic. It's not a big edit, but it's a useful one. Haven't seen many customs of them, so I give you thumbs up.

Thanks! lol thats why I made them I needed them for a game im doing and there werent any on the internet

(09-13-2009, 11:37 PM)D.moffett1990 Wrote: okay thanks, I tried the skull what do you guy/girls think of this .....and now the bokoblin still need more advice on how to get this to match his

I think the hat could use a bit of antialiasing. Also, how the lineart is lighter just under the hat looks weird to me. You should just make it black too or make all the outline black a dark grey considering it's exuding a light aura.

(09-17-2009, 04:30 AM)D.moffett1990 Wrote:

(09-16-2009, 07:33 AM)ProtoTroid X Wrote: I like them, very good. Add some kind of attacking sprite and lighten up the shading just a little and it's perfect.

how bout now?

(09-17-2009, 01:17 PM)Neslug Wrote:

(09-13-2009, 11:37 PM)D.moffett1990 Wrote: okay thanks, I tried the skull what do you guy/girls think of this .....and now the bokoblin still need more advice on how to get this to match his

I think the hat could use a bit of antialiasing. Also, how the lineart is lighter just under the hat looks weird to me. You should just make it black too or make all the outline black a dark grey considering it's exuding a light aura.

ok thanks ill try that !