Hm... Make the brown prat of the bird red. It shouldnt be the same colors it was on the gameboy.

(09-15-2009, 06:54 AM)nicktheslayer Wrote: Hm... Make the brown prat of the bird red. It shouldnt be the same colors it was on the gameboy.

ok(old)

(new)

idk if I like it red but it tried it anywayz.....

Yeah, the problem with the red, is its too concentrated. Its too vivid. Try a paler red. I can really explain it that well. The shape and stuff looks great i think, but the wing might be a bit to big. I dont know, id wait on Black Boo about the shape, because the colors are easier to change.

(09-15-2009, 07:53 AM)nicktheslayer Wrote: Yeah, the problem with the red, is its too concentrated. Its too vivid. Try a paler red. I can really explain it that well. The shape and stuff looks great i think, but the wing might be a bit to big. I dont know, id wait on Black Boo about the shape, because the colors are easier to change.

I did three diff colors its up to black boo for for witch one he wants

That's...not the right palette...it's about 1-3 pages back.

Still, shape and all is good.

Also, if we can, we could do more than two frames. We're kind of going for a Minish cap animation style here.

And the bird's wing tips should probably be red, but the beak should be beige/brown. The GB made them both pale because it was 8-bit

(09-15-2009, 05:18 PM)Black Boo Wrote: That's...not the right palette...it's about 1-3 pages back.

Still, shape and all is good.

Also, if we can, we could do more than two frames. We're kind of going for a Minish cap animation style here.

And the bird's wing tips should probably be red, but the beak should be beige/brown. The GB made them both pale because it was 8-bit

ok cool ill fix it but with the animations im not to good with that but ill try to give it a shot

color like this

Looks pretty good. Though, you might wanna fix up the shading a bit.
Right now the lightsource seems to come from the top left.

Its supposed to come from strait above.

(09-17-2009, 10:03 AM)nicktheslayer Wrote: Its supposed to come from strait above.

ok

It could also use some more shading to look a bit more 3D, y'know?

(09-18-2009, 06:54 PM)Black Boo Wrote: It could also use some more shading to look a bit more 3D, y'know?

yeah I could give it a shot but im not to good at shading

HEY GUYS DON'T DIE HERE!

Sorry about my absense...I've sprained my wrist in a bike crash, so I'm waiting till it heals to get back to spriting.

Can't we get something done while I recover?

(09-24-2009, 07:41 PM)Black Boo Wrote: HEY GUYS DON'T DIE HERE!

Sorry about my absense...I've sprained my wrist in a bike crash, so I'm waiting till it heals to get back to spriting.

Can't we get something done while I recover?

sorry to hear bout your accident i got in a car accident the other day but i didnt get hurt .......ill try to do something tho

School started, i dont rally have enough time do do my own stuff.

Hopefully i helped get the tiles started though.