his face still looks pretty dumb

(10-23-2009, 01:49 PM)mutantyoshi Wrote: this better for Luigi?

I love Yoshi =D

I've made Ness in the new style. Is my first time doing character in this style...



I've used Mario's colours ^^

(10-22-2009, 11:02 PM)koopaul Wrote: I did a real minor edit to your Olimar... And to Mario again, sorry couldn't help it.

I think the original Olimar looks a lot nicer and fits the style better. :\

(10-23-2009, 01:10 PM)Brawler1207 Wrote: Yeah Fox's head is kinda leaning forward a little bit.

I actually did that on purpose. Though I do know something else does look odd about him. I can't figure out exactly what it is. It could be the fact I used Mario's white, instead of using something with more yellow in it.

You'd think I'd have him down, after so many tries at him...

@mutantyoshi, you want to move Luigi's ear forward, and show a bit of the back of Luigi's head.

@koopaul, I'm agreeing with Arthur.


Finally, just how cartoony are we going for here? The way I did Fox's hands, is that acceptable?

(10-23-2009, 02:16 PM)JoseFran Wrote:

(10-23-2009, 01:49 PM)mutantyoshi Wrote: this better for Luigi?

I love Yoshi =D

I've made Ness in the new style. Is my first time doing character in this style...



I've used Mario's colours ^^

Ness looks pretty bad, it looks like you relied too hard on the old sprite.

(10-23-2009, 02:35 PM)Number Six Wrote:

(10-23-2009, 02:16 PM)JoseFran Wrote:

(10-23-2009, 01:49 PM)mutantyoshi Wrote: this better for Luigi?

I love Yoshi =D

I've made Ness in the new style. Is my first time doing character in this style...



I've used Mario's colours ^^

Ness looks pretty bad, it looks like you relied too hard on the old sprite.

Yes, you're right, I've looking at the old sprite a lot, maybe I must change it

Sploder: "@kirbyfan, you have Kirby's mouth too low. Bring it up to just below his cheeks. You might also need to enlarge his eyes and cheeks a tiny bit."

Yeah. I told you, I messed up on the face big time. I'll make a new face when I'm done with the new size.

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Pink - Height and Height Ratio
Red - Ground and Height
Blue - Actually area they stand on
Orange - Correct height for Kirby

So basically, a circle going from the orange line to two pixels above the blue line (so Kirby's body), doesn't look good, so I went one pixel up.

Again, I failed miserably and the face (obviously used the old one for reference), and pretty badly on the shading. Also, now looking at it, I think his arms may be too big? Opinions?

the lines are a bit sketchy but looks good otherwise

Sorry another edit from me... Why do I keep doing this?

(10-23-2009, 05:28 PM)koopaul Wrote: Sorry another edit from me... Why do I keep doing this?

I think his nose is too big, thats my only thing about it.

EDIT: I decided to edit it



Better (my newer one is at the end)

Head:
The left one seems better.
http://www.wiisworld.com/images/news/brawl/yoshi-1.jpg
See. Not quite a full circle.

Limbs:
The left is better, but the right matches the style correctly.

Stomach, Tail, Shell:
Left is better.

this better, newer one is the right one.

I agree.

I prefer the middle one. The longer nose looks better, while the shorter nose looks squished.

i like the right one