What do you guys think of this Pikachu? Damn I don't know what I was thinking turning something like that into a 30's cartoon is hard...

the only thing is the eyes... Try to make them both face the same direction

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His facial expression looks like a cross between a normal "XD" face and Fortran. IMO, the comic strip Brawl in the Family nailed the head perfectly in this strip.

Also, he should, as others have said, look a lot curvier and have a bit less well-defined skeletal structure.

Just a slight update on what some of the people were getting at, like Chirs2ball's suggestion.

should I make it a bit more curvy and smoother then how it currently is still? still kind of unsure how this is coming out.

We should make them Looney Tunes styled-WITH COLOR!

(11-08-2009, 02:39 PM)Drew Wrote:
Just a slight update on what some of the people were getting at, like Chirs2ball's suggestion.

should I make it a bit more curvy and smoother then how it currently is still? still kind of unsure how this is coming out.

His feet are backwards.

(11-08-2009, 03:10 PM)Fret Wrote:

(11-08-2009, 02:39 PM)Drew Wrote:
Just a slight update on what some of the people were getting at, like Chirs2ball's suggestion.

should I make it a bit more curvy and smoother then how it currently is still? still kind of unsure how this is coming out.

His feet are backwards.

ffff you're right


also added a few other fixes too

I don't know. Maybe you should start over. Now this is what he probably should look like. Also that's where I got my inspiration for this topic.

Yeah, I think I should restart ether way tbh

back to the drawing board I suppose

EDIT:
Massive revamp

Inb4 anyone mentions anything about the right arm (my left) I'm already aware of that, Fixing that up and an other issues I have already noticed.

lol his feet are backwards again
also his torso and arms are insanely huge, while the rest of his body is sort of small

also, the eyes should be MUCH bigger (again only black Pac-Mans) and his arms ang legs should be much longer and thinner

(11-07-2009, 08:04 PM)koopaul Wrote: What do you guys think of this Pikachu? Damn I don't know what I was thinking turning something like that into a 30's cartoon is hard...

Is this being put up soon?

Also, the mario i think needs do be completely redone.

Mario should be more like this :

http://sheezyart.com/art/view/2171254/

(11-10-2009, 12:01 PM)Frario Wrote: Mario should be more like this :

http://sheezyart.com/art/view/2171254/

koopaul already posted that.

(11-10-2009, 11:54 AM)nicktheslayer Wrote: Also, the mario i think needs do be completely redone.

Are talking the one on the front page or the one that was recently posted?

just curious, though I am in the process of redoing some parts on the new one.
EDITO:
should have uploaded this yesterday =/

Anyways, I ended up remaking the lower part of the body and changed the color of the overalls, and I changed the hat a bit.
I think I could still work on Mario's right arm a bit, it doesn't seem to be as great as I think it should be.
(Those, and I should mention that I made the body a bit smaller)

So what do you guys think of it so far?

ok...that Mario looks very...kind of...needs a bit of...
Well it's kind of weird looking kind of reminds me of a Drawing a little cousing did when he was five or four...
Needs a complete redo.