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11-26-2009, 12:17 PM
(This post was last modified: 11-26-2009, 02:24 PM by Gameboy.)
This looks great. No complaints so far.
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I like it, but a few things bug me.
Mario's pupil seems odd, mainly that it has a lighter pixel in the middle, it's like his pupil is being cut into 2.
The hammer bros pupil seems too light imo.
The Angry sun seems... idk, I really can't explain it, but he seems really off.
All that aside, I love what you've got here, especially that Bowser.
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11-26-2009, 01:18 PM
(This post was last modified: 11-26-2009, 01:20 PM by mutantyoshi.)
very good, but maybe make Luigi a different shade of green? probably darker.
or make Yoshi's shade like the one in New Super Mario Bros. Wii, which is a pale-green color.
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I love everything except peach's face. Keep this up.
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Ho ho ho! Excellent looking stuff, m'boy!
However, I agree with Shyguy Grey about Mario's pupil. I do believe the lighter colors should be on the outside, and the darker on the inside! Otherwise, excellent animations and such. Anything I could say has been said above me.
Keep at it.
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Lemme clear up the confusion about Mario's pupil. What you see in his eye is a highlight. It's not blending of any kind. This style uses highlights like this in the eyes, as you will notice if you look at the lineup.
Additionally, if there were bending on the outside of his pupils, they would be much too small.
Yoshi's colors are fine IMO.
Peach is an obvious WIP, which is why it doesn't look amazing.
GB is working on making Luigi's colors a tad darker.
Hammer Bro's eyes can be fixed easily.
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I understand that it's meant to be highlights on the eyes, but it looks off nonetheless imo. I'm not saying that he should change it no matter what, but htat he should at least try a few other versions to see if any look better.
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Angry Sun looks fantastic. The Yoshi's and their fruits are awesome, and Lakitu is really good too.
Loving this project, would really enjoy the final product.
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This Project's looking good! I really like the Yoshi
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Yoshi and Goomba look really good. Nice work.
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I love these sheets! Can I use for sprite flash or comic?
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11-27-2009, 12:14 AM
(This post was last modified: 11-27-2009, 12:16 AM by CeeY.)
Your colors are too saturated and your shading needs some work. I'd like to see you try something new for a change. I also like the poses, but your colors and shading are the main problems.
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Where are Peach's arms?
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