(12-06-2009, 09:29 PM)mutantyoshi Wrote: I had a try at Nin's Peach, what do you think, one on the right

I'd say its a step in the right direction.

i prefer nin's colours but still looks nice

(12-06-2009, 09:29 PM)mutantyoshi Wrote: I had a try at Nin's Peach, what do you think, one on the right

Ya I agree. Use Nin's colors. Also, try and make her hair less square by her arms.

hows this?

(12-06-2009, 10:04 PM)mutantyoshi Wrote: hows this?

Better now. I'm not sure if there is anything else wrong with it.

Hmm, her arms go in like this: ) too much. They need to be like this: (

I don't know about the body but those are proper sized hands. Her head is still too big. Her head is not comically bigger like Mario's is. Its closer to human body to head proportions.

I also tried make her dress more three dimensional rather than flat.

As for the head, I've taken a few notes...



Notice the head should be about the same size as the torso. Also the width of her hair should not extend past the shoulders. The top curl of her hair is shorter than the bottom not the same length.

Now THAT looks like Peach. Good job.

Coming much better. Her face needs a little editing.

I tried the head I keep screwing it up...

Hmm, I think her arms need to come away from her body more.
you have it like on the left, and it should be more like on the right (not exactly like on the right, just more like it, ha).

I tried giving her a head, but I don't know if it's good.

(12-07-2009, 05:34 PM)Sphacks Wrote: Hmm, I think her arms need to come away from her body more.
you have it like on the left, and it should be more like on the right (not exactly like on the right, just more like it, ha).

That would be to masculine. A more feminine structure would be the way it is now.

i think we just need to shrink the old head a bit

And it needs more internal black lines to define it. That or make more contrast between colors