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http://shippochattroom.webs.com/apps/pho...d=64945971

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my syte

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u can post more sheets here u no

Chill out. You don't need to multipost.

This is bad. Really bad. The lineart is messy and has absolutely zero shading. I can't make out any of the details.

.....did you made this on paint ?
Because...this is nothing like any sprite I have ever seen...

(01-06-2010, 01:32 PM)Alcala Wrote: .....did you made this on paint ?

paint has absolutely nothing to do with the outcome of a sprite, what matters is how the spriter executes creation of said sprite

(01-06-2010, 01:30 PM)Vipershark Wrote:

OH GOD

(01-06-2010, 12:16 PM)shippothekitsune123 Wrote: u can post more sheets here u no

i got a lot more if you want to check em

I

brb gotta get some new contacts b/c I can't tell what I'm looking at

(01-06-2010, 01:30 PM)Vipershark Wrote:

its


beautiful

Ok, I guess I can see what the hack your trying to do.
But, it's pertty bad.
You need to fix every thing.
Fixs the lines, and the colouring.
Because I really don't know what the hack i'm looking at.
I'm guessing its a girl with a hummer?
And what is that blue thingy in the running sprites?
Like why would you glow when your running, or when your saving?

(01-06-2010, 01:32 PM)Alcala Wrote: .....did you made this on paint ?

I make all of my work on paint

(01-06-2010, 08:20 PM)Baegal Wrote:

(01-06-2010, 01:32 PM)Alcala Wrote: .....did you made this on paint ?

I make all of my work on paint

as do I

anyway this is horribad. try making the outline clear and consistent before you do anything else.