(12-18-2009, 07:34 PM)Pikmin Awsomeness Wrote:

Holy shit you did that so wrong.

for once me and tyvon agree on something


one: why is kirby hot pink or whatever that is? kirby's light pink, show me one OFFICIAL picture (not photoshopped) with hot pink kirby and i'll drop that argument
two:The eyes are weird
three or four or something: Shading's kind of messed up, and use a slightly darker pink for the outline by the lightsource

See how Kirby gets darker the the farther from the right, and not have the corners darker from the inside


Try something like this, but better. My shading sucks


Or do a custom and not a recolour/edit

holy fuck at least he's trying

jesus christ

he's not trying. we're trying and he will start making anything else in 3 more pages.

Ravecat, you must've missed the last thread.
He doesn't listen to crits.

I dunno, he listened to the pillowshading thing at least. I mean, he did it wrong, but he did something.

I'm going to focuse on this now, and this only, no pikmin or anything else

P.S. I trided to shade it like the shading in Kirby squek squad

will somone please give feedback

Dude, be patient. It's only been about three hours since you posted your update.

That aside, I can definitely say the shading is looking better than it did. Now try making the shading just a little rounder on his body and right hand. Also the bottom of Kirby looks a bit flat.

The reaction you should be experiencing in this topic

lol..

you're extremely helpful.

about the sprite, you need to lighten its left part more.