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03-15-2010, 12:38 PM
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First sprites I've made that don't look like
King Harkinian:
http://img25.imageshack.us/img25/650/kingharkinian.png
Gwonam:
http://img139.imageshack.us/img139/8966/gwonam.png
Yeah, not much.
I've also got these on my deviant Art page.
King's battle sprites made
no credit is required, but it'd be nice
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Good Start. They both definately need more poses
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MAI BOI and DINNER
But seriously, it is a decent start, you may want to improve the shading or shrink his head somewhat to be more proportional to the body unless the bigger head is a style you are going for.
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(03-15-2010, 12:38 PM)smbmaster99 Wrote: First sprites I've made that don't look like
And you thought trying to submit them straight away was a good idea?
Please take the time to read stickied threads if you're new.
http://www.spriters-resource.com/communi...p?tid=6533
Custom Sprite Commission is NOT a place for new spriters. To Sprite Discussion with ye.
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(03-15-2010, 01:33 PM)GrooveMan.exe Wrote: (03-15-2010, 12:38 PM)smbmaster99 Wrote: First sprites I've made that don't look like
And you thought trying to submit them straight away was a good idea?
Please take the time to read stickied threads if you're new.
http://www.spriters-resource.com/communi...p?tid=6533
Custom Sprite Commission is NOT a place for new spriters. To Sprite Discussion with ye.
thanks for the c+c everyone.
I have read thew stickies and rules, but that was a reaaally long time ago. This isn't the first time I submitted something custom.
Back a long time ago, I made some jacked up mario bros ones that make this look like gold (I'm not saying that these
are gold though)
Thanks again for the c+c
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These are an awesome start! I can't wait to see how it looks when it's finished. The anims look a bit stiff. I have the same problem. But I can see these going somewhere good.
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Updated King Harkinian ^^
I decided to go ahead and do the battle sprites, and they're turning out better than the first try.
I also made his head smaller, which one of you pointed out (never would'a hit me unless you mentioned it)
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UPDATED King Hakinian again ^( ^
I forgot to say, that no credit is required, but it'd be nice
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put every sequence into an animation and see it for yourself how slopy and jagged that is.