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#46
06-01-2010, 10:57 AM
(06-01-2010, 10:56 AM)Alpha Six Wrote: That head is awfully squished...

This. Almost looks like a sideways watermelon. Perhaps you should take a look at some of the other posts to find that his jaw shortness needs to be fixed. Yours looks pretty eliptical.
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06-01-2010, 11:10 AM
[Image: SnaketSR-1.png]?
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#48
06-01-2010, 11:50 AM
Ugly. The face seems too stretched out and his nose looks ridiculous
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#49
06-01-2010, 11:52 AM
Still really squished.
And why are his left and right legs on the same foreground line?
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#50
06-01-2010, 01:39 PM
I believe I have it now.

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#51
06-01-2010, 02:42 PM
His face. He looks *so* happy now! ^o^

... Yeah, that doesn't work. Maybe shrink his eyes a tiny bit. Refer to one of the earlier Marth sprites for a good eye size.
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#52
06-01-2010, 03:08 PM
better?

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#53
06-01-2010, 05:20 PM
A bit better, yes, though he still doesn't quite look as mean as he usually does.

Here a few edits to make him look a bit more fierce, as well as a few different edits to the face in an attempt to make him look even more like Snake.
[Image: tempoz.png]
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#54
06-01-2010, 05:26 PM
(06-01-2010, 05:20 PM)Sploder Wrote: A bit better, yes, though he still doesn't quite look as mean as he usually does.

Here a few edits to make him look a bit more fierce, as well as a few different edits to the face in an attempt to make him look even more like Snake.
[Image: tempoz.png]
my fav is 3 so far the rest reminds me of chuck norris
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#55
06-01-2010, 05:32 PM
Exactly what I was thinking. Pull his eye forward a pixel.
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#56
06-01-2010, 11:39 PM
Wow, so much work going on here to Snake, I like this!!! Big Grin
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#57
06-01-2010, 11:43 PM (This post was last modified: 06-01-2010, 11:43 PM by Tea.)
I think his chin should be squarer.
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#58
06-02-2010, 02:10 AM
3 is definitely looking best to me. The eyes are bolder, but smaller. Nice. *No intentional rhymes there - Seriously*

And I really don't think the chin needs to be more square. I'm comparing the sprite to a picture of him in Brawl, and the head shape (especially around the chin) is fine.
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#59
06-02-2010, 05:40 AM
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#60
06-02-2010, 09:34 AM
Those eyes are staring at me through the computer on four. D :
I still think three is good, but you should incorporate the 'not having a perfect circle on the top of your head' idea to three.
"Odd"?
"Odd" is Benjamin Franklin playing tether-ball with Van Helsing,
"Odd" is a big-toed tadpole taken by the tides of a dawn since past,
"ODD" is a 40-year-old senior officer who cries himself to sleep every night dreaming of a life on the road as a traveling naked condortionist, never returning home, never stopping, never breaking his stride!
...
Unless he saw a T.G.I Friday's. Fucking loves that place...
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