I started Bomberman for the Fantasy Smash Project, but I have some kind of feeling that he's a bit off style:
   
I could need some more advice how to fix him.

I just want to be sure that he fits the style before I start the whole sheet.

newest Version:

fix the arms a lttle bit.seems too -- sketchy.

and the head's a bit pillowed

What happened to Sploder's Bomberman?

The head and body are way too blocky. smooth it out.

shading's also messed up.

@ Phantom Kirby: I asked Spolder if he's still doing him, but he said he didn't have enough time. He had no problem with me doing Bomberman.

Fixed the head and body a bit, but I don't know which new head is better :/
   

@ gorsal: Do you mean the grey part or the face part being pillowed? I fixed the grey part.

Arm looks like it's stuffed with cotton.Make it smoother and maybe a little thicker.

First new one is better.

Yeah, now it's better. But his boly looks uneven and too blocky. The pink bal's shading on his head contradicts with the head itself. Also, his arms look bad. Check the official Bomberman sprites so you get some good refs.

EDIT: Ooops, my bad, I didn't see the body update you did sorry. Also try lowering his face a bit to see how it looks.

I did some minor changes.

I just don't know what to do about the arms :/ I made them a bit darker.
I also moved the left eye 1 pixel right. He's facing other characters more now.
The version with the lowered face doesn't look bad, but I personally prefer the original position.

EDIT: sorry for imagebanana, I used it in an German forum and the users could see it.
Here's Bomberman hosted by imageshack:

Um image banana?

(09-13-2008, 02:48 PM)mozzy Wrote: Um image banana?

The same thing happened with me in the KA project. I can't see the blooper.

make the elbow smoother and it'll be good I guess.