I'll clean this up if I have time. I probably won't have time though, idk

the pants are unshaded in one frame

well what do you think? I'll clean it up later

(09-06-2010, 01:15 PM)Burn Wrote: the pants are unshaded in one frame

oh shi-


k

it looks wobbly as hell (look at his other arm and his left boot's spike wtf)

I think it wobbles with style!!!!!

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Also not sure about how I feel with the head having less movement than everything else and the holster gets pretty weird

Done some more to my entry. Some cheeky midframing here and there as well as some touch-ups to existing frames. Frame count is now at 12.

I'm starting over because i'm gay. And this might end up being more dynamic when animated, I dunno. I've not decided what she should have floating in his hand (I can't draw hands, I wonder how this will turn out)

I abandoned my first idea and started on this, which I think I might abandon as well, but I need something placeholding here in case the deadline changes and I end up having nothing.

(09-06-2010, 03:44 PM)Hoeloe Wrote: Done some more to my entry. Some cheeky midframing here and there as well as some touch-ups to existing frames. Frame count is now at 12.

I actually really like this, the animation is very smooth. A few things to the actual style could be touched up, but still - very promising.

Oh my, liking your concept there Tom

I see your battle network influences GrooveMan, hehe~
If you go with an outstretched hand remember to give it some personality, like in your avatar. I have trouble spriting hands too

Vibin' hoeloe but the elbow on the far arm animates really strangely

The hat kinda looks more like it's growing than actually flopping up

Now that's a fiiiine piece of work.

(09-06-2010, 04:23 PM)StarSock64 Wrote: Vibin' hoeloe but the elbow on the far arm animates really strangely

Did some jiggery-pokery to the far arm. Should be at least a little better now.





Next up is trying some alterations to the style, as mentioned by Dazz, unless anyone has any more crits on the animation that I can touch up.