trying to get into spriting again spriting my character

going to add semi realistic body


please cheer me on while i try to complete a mediocre sprite

His hair goes into the hat.

(10-18-2010, 09:54 AM)Orgasmatron Wrote: please cheer me on while i try to complete a mediocre sprite

Stop fishing for attention, bro.

I came in here expecting a topic from someone who doesn't know what to sprite.


Proton pretty much aced what I was going to say, so I have nothing to add aside from a little shading wouldn't hurt.

(10-18-2010, 09:54 AM)Orgasmatron Wrote: please cheer me on while i try to complete a mediocre sprite

(10-18-2010, 03:37 PM)Gors٫ Gors Wrote: Stop fishing for attention, bro.

gors i honestly didnt mean for it to sound like that

i meant more like comments and crits



and heres an update



didnt scrap the old one just worked it up to this

making progress slowly

Shading wouldn't hurt.
Black outline on the nose is ugly.
Strange belt you got there.

that body is incredibly flat. Even if that bottom edge is meant to be his coat, it's not going to be a straight line. The nose doesn't have to be entirely outlined like that; and could do with a bit of smoothing.

(10-19-2010, 03:06 PM)Orgasmatron Wrote:

(10-18-2010, 03:37 PM)Gors٫ Gors Wrote: Stop fishing for attention, bro.

gors i honestly didnt mean for it to sound like that

i meant more like comments and crits

I know, but that's why you need to think in what you're writing.

Suddenly saying something in the lines of 'im making a mediocre sprite ' gives us a feeling that you're talking bad of yourself just to see someone say 'oh please, don't say that! you aren't mediocre!'.

not mad or anything, just giving a non-sprite-related tip. I've got into several bad situations because of that, so I simply don't like to see someone doing the same.