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do anything thats not a pokemon. leave your comfort zone. try something completely original, even if its a wild doodle. otherwise you'd be stuck trying to replicate something "just for it to look like the original" instead of learning anything new.
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replace "pokemon" witth any existing character on my first post.
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(11-10-2010, 12:47 PM)Tachikoma Wrote: replace "pokemon" witth any existing character on my first post.
At least it isn't pokemon, give the guy some chance.
You're giving more then one light source on Mario, this kind of makes the shading look pretty sleezy at best.
Try to keep one light source, while I'm at it colors could use slightly more saturation.
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-His chin/jaw is extremely far back compared to his forehead.
-His eye is too far back.
-He's pillowshaded (Specifically the overalls).
-Alot of colors could be removed, and the default MS Paint pallete is an eye sore.
-His hat logo is out of perspective.
-And he needs a definite lightsource.