(01-09-2011, 01:34 PM).MXXai. Wrote: Hey Clash, I can help you with colours, If you'd like.

Sure feel free but use this one please...

There, now has better contrast with the grass, water and dirt.
I shortened the use of colours becasue you had countless shades that were all similar.
Didn't edit anything (except the water) and I would've helped with the dirt
but I don't even know how to dither myself
Oh, and wanted to say the grass is shaded more like water than grass.

That's looking much better now, but it still has the same problems as the original.

thumbs up thank you so much

(01-09-2011, 01:32 PM)Negative-Zer0 Wrote: The FD from a couple of pages back was on the metallic side of things.



BTW clash, your line arts are great, but your choice of color and shading needs some work. It seems as though there are too many colors on that Battlefield.

Now that I look back, that lineart is horrible and we've all probably greatly improved our spriting skills since then. I might actually redo the whole FD some time soon.

better?
edit: sorry copied the wrong link lol

Likin' that new lineart, Reap, but please edit the post so that people don't have to copy-paste the link to see the picture.

(01-09-2011, 05:50 PM).MXXai. Wrote:
There, now has better contrast with the grass, water and dirt.
I shortened the use of colours becasue you had countless shades that were all similar.
Didn't edit anything (except the water) and I would've helped with the dirt
but I don't even know how to dither myself
Oh, and wanted to say the grass is shaded more like water than grass.

This really needs to be shaded rather than dithered.

To be honest i think the FD should just be completly redone like iceman said, on the second one i think the lines should be worked out more before the color is added (or at least shading)

btw i made this a while back its bridge of eldin you guys can use it if you like

I think you mean to say "Bridge of Eldin," but thanks all the same.

(01-10-2011, 01:50 AM)PortalGuru Wrote: I think you mean to say "Bridge of Eldin," but thanks all the same.

lol my bad but if you guys ever need line art or blue prints for stages let me know
but feel free to use this as you want i know this game is still far from adding stages such as this but it never hurts to be one step ahead

I decided to go ahead and make a sample texture since I didn't like the original.
What do you guys think?

We're getting there, but the rocks should be a lot larger. They shouldn't look like they would crumble at the slightest touch, especially considering it's a floating platform. You've got the right idea though, so hopefully that'll bring in some good fixings.

For the dirt, I like it. But like Tyvon said. But maybe Not as rocky/crumbly, I enjoy the grass very much, though