Thanks, Im syched up now!!! Ill start the rest right now!!! Ill keep it updated as much as i can, for every different move/sprite strip.

(10-08-2008, 01:57 PM)gokuguy Wrote: Thanks, Im syched up now!!! Ill start the rest right now!!! Ill keep it updated as much as i can, for every different move/sprite strip.

wait what do u mean that your working on the sprite because im working on it right now

What u mean? That ur making the sheet, or editing the original sprite? If u mean the original sprite, please look at my newest version first, attached. About the sheet, i already have some sprites done on it.

EDIT* If u meant taking over my sonic sprite to make the rest of the sheet, I didnt say anything about giving the sonic sprite away, I said that about the Mario Kart stage, for anyone who wants to finish it, dont need credit, but Sonic is a different story. It said nothing about that in this thread. I have been fixing it as i go along, as i see things wrong with him.

(10-08-2008, 06:10 PM)gokuguy Wrote: What u mean? That ur making the sheet, or editing the original sprite? If u mean the original sprite, please look at my newest version first, attached. About the sheet, i already have some sprites done on it.

EDIT* If u meant taking over my sonic sprite to make the rest of the sheet, I didnt say anything about giving the sonic sprite away, I said that about the Mario Kart stage, for anyone who wants to finish it, dont need credit, but Sonic is a different story. It said nothing about that in this thread. I have been fixing it as i go along, as i see things wrong with him.

oh okay gokuguy my apologies for not recognizing that sooner

(10-08-2008, 06:49 PM)supersmashbrosspriter1207 Wrote:

(10-08-2008, 06:10 PM)gokuguy Wrote: What u mean? That ur making the sheet, or editing the original sprite? If u mean the original sprite, please look at my newest version first, attached. About the sheet, i already have some sprites done on it.

EDIT* If u meant taking over my sonic sprite to make the rest of the sheet, I didnt say anything about giving the sonic sprite away, I said that about the Mario Kart stage, for anyone who wants to finish it, dont need credit, but Sonic is a different story. It said nothing about that in this thread. I have been fixing it as i go along, as i see things wrong with him.

oh okay gokuguy my apologies for not recognizing that sooner

Oh, its quite alright. I just wanted to get it straight. If u see anything that needs improving, tell me, & Ill see what i can do.Its better when more than 1 person looking at them. Ill give u credit if u do.

I'm posting to break up the repetitiveness of GokuGuy+ SSBS1207.

I'd make Sonic more in Nin's style, study his color style and shading and put them into your sprite. (I'm a hypocrite when I say this though, my Ness doesn't really follow his rules)

Ok, ill do that & show how it looks, then we can decide.

EDIT* I HAVE NO IDEA WHAT NIN'S STYLE IS!!! It looks like all of the sprites r in different styles to me. Like Bowser, Ivysaur, & Lucario r the closest to my style, & they have no comments to fix them in any way, & i see why, they r like perfect. When u compare the colors to the original Brawl characters, they r almost exactly the same colors, especially Lucario, who i think needs to be a bit lighter & have an outline.

That's because he didn't make those, an example of his style is Mario.

To be honest, a few characters are totaly out of style but, it's always better than style mixing
EDIT: reposting, images by me, sheeted by Liam.
(Pik can you add it to the 1st post ty)

i have a lot of crits to make on the front page of sprites


should i

YES YES YES.

Please.

i started getting lazy



but here

from top to bottom

C. Falcon: his right leg (our left) is too short and needs to be extended slightly, his right leg should go out further as well. upper body is fine

donkey kong: too many highlights on the upper body on the left side where the shading should be, there should also be more shading under the arm

samus his legs are in too awkward of a position, they shouldnt be in exactly the same position, shading is fine (other than the obvious block)

link's right leg is in an awkward position and the skirt is too tight. shoe on his right leg is also incorrectly shaded

yoshi has too many shades for the style, or they have too much contrast between them, or not enough (not sure), back of body should also be shaded because the tail is not the only spot that should be shaded. lightsource at too high of an angle, like 45 degrees rather than 25ish

luigis head, neck, upperbody and upper arms should all be thicker, shading is fine, but his right leg again is awkward

fox needs to be taller, pose and legs smoothed out and the shading on his legs is coming from an opposite lightsource than that of his head


mario is fine

ness' hands go out a bit too far, imo, but thats just preference.

pikachu's head is too big, and the shades need more contrast, as well as the lightsource fix.

jigglypuff's outline is too dark compared to the style, same with kirby, shapewise these 2 are fine, except jigglypuffs feet should be slightly bigger

bowser looks like a color reduction, and nothing else, completely obselete of the style.

ganondorf you cant even recognise his features

mewtwos pose is in an odd position, with the upper body pose the legs should be more spread out.

marths head is too small, and his legs too short but otherwise hes p good.

zelda is leaning too far forward

sheik's right leg is in an awkward position, and hes leaning too far back, and his hat is shaded incorrectly

peach is leaning a bit too far forward, move her upper body back a pixel

wheres roys cape??? legs dont make sense, nor does any of the shading (which also needs more contrast)

falcos legs are too straight, otherwise hes p good

young link has the same problem as old link

ice climbers need more contrast

2nd game and watch is better, and is fine

pichu needs more contrast and thats about it

charizard's shading doesnt make sense, and in some places its a bit pillowed and his outline is too dark, good lineart and pose though.

dedede is shaded too realistically, with shades that dont work and looks too round compared to the nice flatness of mario and other good sprites.

snake needs to be completely redone, hes facing the wrong way, his arms are in a good position, but his legs arent, they are in the kinda dont do pose you have on the front page

zss is waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaay too thin, but otherwise is decent, and needs finishing

r.o.b. is facing completely right but shouldnt be, he should be in style. also hes too big imo

pikmin are fine, but olimar should have his legs spread apart and be in a battle ready pose

ikes limbs are way too short and should be extended and his sword moved into a decent pose also a bit more contrast

trainer needs lighter outline, new legs that suit the arms and more contrast

pits upper body is fine but his lower body needs fixing, complete redoing

Lucarios shading and colours are decent though the anatomy and pose are completely off, he should be facing between forward and right not pure right

the third sonic is great, though could use some more shading on the spines

venusaur needs to face not right once again, and its shading is from the top not from the 25 degree angle

wario is great, but his head needs to move back a pixel or two

lucas' head turn is fine, because his body is facing the right angle, and looks good, and the shading is great too

diddy obviously needs redoing, size, pose. colours, anatomy, nearly everything is off. its a decent sprite but nothing like it should be

toon link has the wrong lightsource, and his left leg needs redoing (pose wise)

wolf is just crap, no offense whoever made it but it could use complete redoing

squirtle is fine, but his feet is weird, and below the mouth seems odd

metaknight is near perfect, no complaints from me


items: smash ball too big
most things are way too big or too simplistic. the crates are fine
so are the barrels
party baloon has wrong lightsource

hammer has wrong lightsource
targets are pretty bad

The Game&Watch on the first page isn't the current one.

(Only a couple of new poses added since my last update, I got lazy and haven't touched in in quite some time. I'll have to get back to that pretty soon. >.> )

that one looks good to me

I'll fix up Ness and Lucas.

Anyway, anyone remember these?

http://web.archive.org/web/2007122918143...wtopic=117
http://web.archive.org/web/2006070309414...tendo.net/
http://web.archive.org/web/2007032907255...tendo.net/