Umm...... Hi!?

This is my very first time posting here and the very first time i created my own sprite. I'm just 12 and I wanted to start with an easy one. I was playing Super Smash Brothers Melee and I started drawing them. I thought about spriting and thought of an easy character. It only left me with 2 characters, Jigglypuff and Kirby. I decided to go with Jigglypuff so here it is!

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Overall, the sprites don't have much contrast and shading. Refer to the Sprite Dictionary for spriting techniques. You may get some harsh crit over here, but don't worry, we give crit to help.

But if Cyanide is 12 years old, that means they're too young to be here...

(06-11-2012, 09:23 AM)Mighty Jetters Wrote: But if Cyanide is 12 years old, that means they're too young to be here...

Well TGE was 13 when he joined right? Let's give him some good old C+C. You're good at that MJ.

Quote:I'm just 12

well, that was easy.

ban & lock. The rules don't say you must be at least 13 without a reason; be patient and wait like everyone else.

User emailed me and is now 13.
Ban lifted and thread reopened.

Okay first thing that I can notice off the bat is that Jigglypuff looks like a cube.

Make it more sphere like.

Stifflypuff

Well guys, Thanks for the criticts and yeah it does look far from Jigglyuff that's why I'm making another sprite for Jigglypuff. about my age, I just turned 13 last july 1 so yeah, ban lifted.... I'll post it here if i'm finished with my work! Thanks again

Ummm... Hi again guys...

Well after your comments and critics (Thanks again for your advice!) I created another one and I might say, I Improved quite alot that it made me smile... I know I still have alot to go but here's a sneak peek of my new sprite!


Please leave comments and advice for me Hopefully you liked it!

Despite some flaws it's definitely better than the old one, nice job.

I'd try utilizing the darkest pink shade more around the body, it seems a bit underused

(07-21-2012, 02:26 AM)-Bwar- Wrote: Despite some flaws it's definitely better than the old one, nice job.

I'd try utilizing the darkest pink shade more around the body, it seems a bit underused

Thanks!

Yes, i didn't use the darkest shade of pink isn't used that much. I'll try using it and hopefully a better outcome well occur! Thanks for your comments and advice! it really helps me

(I'll post the sprite when i'm done )

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Hi guys!

Here i go Again.... I edited it by using the darkest shade of pink more, making Jigglypuff more circular and fixed Jigglypuff's curl so here it is!

Leave more advice,comments and suggestions! Hope you like it! (Thanks again Ploaj for your advice!)

I suggest shrinking the feet a little because it currently looks like it's standing on its toes. The eyes also are not the same color as many of the pictures I've seen of Jigglypuff, more of a greenish blue would work better. The palette could probably be a little more bright and vibrant as well.
EDIT:

I edited it a little bit to show you what I mean.
I may have gotten a bit carried away with this! hehe

Try upping the contrast on the pink shades slightly. Even saturating the darkest shade a little might help.