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25x25 Mario Head. Need C+C - Teeks - 10-27-2008 Okay so, just got bored and was messing around with an old project I started long ago where I was making Nintendo character mugshots. But they were 50x50. I tried that but I'm not good enough for it, so I shrunk it down to 25x25. This is what I got. Now before I continue on with this project thing, I need some critique. The colors and basic style, you could say, are based on the style used in Scrambled and Friendly Fire. Overall, I don't have a problem with the line art, cept maybe the stache, but I do have a problem with the eyes, I need big help there. And any other crits you can give are appreciated. So yeah, let me have it. But be gentle. RE: 25x25 Mario Head. Need C+C - Gold - 10-27-2008 The eyes could use some work, and something seems off about the mouth, but otherwise it's pretty good looking. RE: 25x25 Mario Head. Need C+C - Teeks - 10-27-2008 Any advice on how to fix said problems? I know something's wrong, I just dunno how to fix it Thanks though RE: 25x25 Mario Head. Need C+C - Gold - 10-27-2008 For the eyes I would probably suggest having the pupils in the center of his eye rather than off to the side, but I'm not sure about the mouth... RE: 25x25 Mario Head. Need C+C - Colton - 10-27-2008 Eyes look a bit screwy as Arthur said, and he told you how to fix them. But I think you could take the bottom left corner pixel off the mouth because it looks too square. RE: 25x25 Mario Head. Need C+C - Pik - 10-27-2008 Lol Teeks still sprites like PT 2006 Anyway, this is okay, but the colors seem not vibrant enough and there's lots of banding. RE: 25x25 Mario Head. Need C+C - Teeks - 10-27-2008 (10-27-2008, 01:30 AM)pikspiksmaroator Wrote: Lol Teeks still sprites like PT 2006 Is that bad? It's very apparent that I'm still stuck in the past as I have no idea what banding is. RE: 25x25 Mario Head. Need C+C - Pik - 10-27-2008 Not really, it's pretty nostalgic to see. (Yes, I was around back then, I lurked as GFLK) Banding is basically like pillowing, but the lightsource isn't from the middle. It's kind of tracing the outline/another shade for shading. RE: 25x25 Mario Head. Need C+C - Teeks - 10-27-2008 Messed with the eyes and mouth a little. Didn't mess with anything else. If anyone has any further advice, I'm open. |