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Bored - FattyMcGee - 05-28-2008
Aint he a cutie?
Now with mouth opening action!
RE: Bored - thunder bro - 05-28-2008
Yes, sprite some more poses.
RE: Bored - Geo the Fox - 05-28-2008
It's pretty good, except for a few minor beefs I have, which i'll say in this following sentence:
He has no shading, he should be slightly taller, the mouth should go more with his round body and be pushed back a bit along the Z-axis, the eye stalks are too wide and should look more like they're coming from the back, not the bottom, there's a lack of efforts in the dots, and they have no depth, you made the color of the face go out too far and magically change to red when the actual beast has somewhat of a blend, the feet are the wrong color and shape, the nose isn't correctly pointed and this, by the way, throws off the nostrils, the fangs are slightly farther back, at that angle, the skin on the back of the eyes should be seen, the angle itself is pretty odd but whatever floats your boat.
That's all. Nice job!
RE: Bored - FattyMcGee - 05-28-2008
WOAH, i said i was bored, NOT professional...
RE: Bored - TPoe - 05-28-2008
No shading, not fat enough, shape is weird, legs too fat, not tall enough mouth is wierd no eyelids eys too short when his mouth open it barely changes(Upper jaw) spots are all the same size fangs misplaced, legs and eyes don't match the angle, should be no line between color transition, and WHY.
RE: Bored - TPoe - 05-28-2008
By the way nice picture Geo.
RE: Bored - TPoe - 05-28-2008
FattyMcGee Wrote:WOAH, i said i was bored, NOT professional...
THAT'S NO EXCUSE, lol.
RE: Bored - FattyMcGee - 05-28-2008
is this better?
RE: Bored - thunder bro - 05-28-2008
possibly... not!
RE: Bored - Geo the Fox - 05-28-2008
TPoe Wrote:By the way nice picture Geo.It's a rip, but thanks.
RE: Bored - Zee - 05-29-2008
FattyMcGee Wrote:is this better?
I suggest you take your own topic more seriously or I'll show you what joke topics deserve.
RE: Bored - FattyMcGee - 06-10-2008
Well here it goes again, bring on the criticism.
RE: Bored - Random Talking Bush - 06-10-2008
Geo the Fox Wrote:Yes, and it's from the same game as the character in my avatar. Ran's of a higher rank than Chen, though, so he's right about "With an awesomer avatar... than a Random Talking Bush.". :BTPoe Wrote:By the way nice picture Geo.It's a rip, but thanks.
RE: Bored - FattyMcGee - 06-10-2008
what has your guy's avatar have to do with my work of art?
RE: Bored - Random Talking Bush - 06-11-2008
FattyMcGee Wrote:what has your guy's avatar have to do with my work of art?Um... Nothing, really.
*flicks switch back to "on topic"*The first Bulborb looks fine, the second one is obviously a joke, and the eyes/legs on the third (isometric) one seem a little bit off. You don't take my word for it, though, since I'm not really good at giving critiques and whatnot.
