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Needs work. - Vidgameguy777 - 04-19-2009 Yeah, I know. It sucks currently. I'm not very good and this is my first venture outside of 8-bit that was done completely custom. Post your criticisms. It's a WIP, and I need help. Take it and edit it to show how I should fix it if you want. It would really help. PS: Yes, I know the walking animation looks akward. Sorry if this in some way makes you mad/annoyed. RE: Needs work. - Chris2Balls [:B] - 04-19-2009 I'm annoyed because you've used imperatives and haven't said "please". The colours are very badly used, there are issues with anatomy, the animation isn't smooth and you should check how somebody walks/runs and jumps. RE: Needs work. - Lemon - 04-19-2009 That is one ugly sprite sheet. The animation is terrible, looka t someone walking, and try to split it into stages. The colors are terrible, and everything Chris said. I don't like imperatives.