Mr. Mask

[Tero]

[Tero]

No comment?

[King of Bad Posters]

I think its pretty good it lacks only has in the hair unless you intended it to have no shading i like it though you can fix up the hair line art nothing else i can say,Keep on truckin.

[Tero]

Oh, I fixed some of the shading on it but I don't really intend to have much shading for hair.


And I also worked on this a bit

[Cobalt Blue]

you should avoid pillowshading those teeth and lineart overall. if you were aiming to make those lines smoother.

also, is the anatomy intended? because the lower character is having a problem with the neck and the forehead(the hair is basically eating 1/3 of the skull.

i could do an edit to better ilustrate this, if you want.

[Tero]

Sure go for if you want.

[Cobalt Blue]

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i basically reworked the shape of the face, and reduced the size of the face features(wich was the main issue).

also, you should try to use other colors to shade the skin. try some purples, some blues, etc.