Should I expand/ work on this more?

[Kenjitake]

I need to make more topics... anyhoo, I have this sheet of a Metroid Zero Mission Phazon suit Samus that I made the summer of last year but didn't bother to submit it before I left. So after sometime, I just tweaked and added parts to it, and seeing it again made me think "Should I submit it to TSR? Or should I first see what others say, possibly improve, possibly expand, then submit?"... Picked the second choice, so here it is (Note- this is an OLD sheet, I have not done much on it besides a few recoloring here and there and stuff)

[Alpha Six]

Update the color palette, the color choices are pretty bad.

[Kenjitake]

ok, we all know the Phazon suit is jet-black, but I worked a little bit with the pallet on that. I changed the red lights and visors... I don't know why I had them as pink for the lightest, I just touched up the helmet and chest area, and I changed the gray on the inner legs:

C+C? remember though... it is suppose to be Metroid Zero Mission style.
EDIT: I didn't work on the stomach and arm cannon (the cannon doesn't fit the style, I know so I'll fix it later)