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06-26-2008, 07:24 PM
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Just want to know what you guys think.
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06-26-2008, 07:30 PM
-Needs shading
-A better palette (please don't use MS Paint default colors 'cos they suck)
-Sword and spear are monstruosly enormous
-he looks too stiff and blocky
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06-26-2008, 07:32 PM (This post was last modified: 06-26-2008, 07:35 PM by Corporal Tom.)
The sword is dark nut sword and the spear is a moblins. Wait, your right.
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06-26-2008, 07:36 PM
Corporal Tom Wrote:The sword is dark nut sword and the spear is a moblins. Wait, your right.

i know, but they're too big anyways...
those guys aren't that big...
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06-26-2008, 07:38 PM (This post was last modified: 06-26-2008, 07:39 PM by TPoe.)
Honestly it sucks, no shading, bad lineart and bad weapons.
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06-26-2008, 07:41 PM
TPoe Wrote:Honestly it sucks.

Yeah but instead be nice and give some C+C/c&c just like i did, don't be rude...
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06-26-2008, 07:42 PM (This post was last modified: 06-26-2008, 07:44 PM by Sonikku.)
http://www.spriters-resource.com/nintend...linkpj.png

Yanno, you should give credit for the base sprite, swords, spear, and shield.
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06-27-2008, 09:19 AM
TPoe Wrote:Honestly it sucks, no shading, bad lineart and bad weapons.
And quite honestly Tpoe, you're really not good at spriting anyways.
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06-27-2008, 09:26 AM (This post was last modified: 06-27-2008, 09:26 AM by CeeY.)
Oh I thought he made the shield never mind. Yeah what bugs me is the linart. And it needs shading, AA, sword is too big, change the colors, dont use MS paint default, use custom colors.
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06-27-2008, 09:26 AM
Aaah, thats where I saw that sprite. Thought it looked familiar.
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06-27-2008, 09:54 AM
mmm, this fails to amuse me. Sad
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06-27-2008, 11:14 AM
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Update.
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#13
06-27-2008, 11:32 AM
Hey at least your improving, but it still needs AA in the corner of the sprite, and the shading needs more contrast.
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#14
06-27-2008, 01:23 PM
Corporal Tom Wrote:Update.

Still needs better shading. I sugest you play with the "Define Custom Colors" option on MS Paint so you can find different colors for better shades.
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#15
06-27-2008, 05:46 PM
EdpR Wrote:-Needs shading
-A better palette (please don't use MS Paint default colors 'cos they suck)
-he looks too stiff and blocky
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