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LunchPolice · (This post was last modified: 07-31-2009, 08:14 PM by LunchPolice.)

Hey, I'm new here. Welcome to Quackbillion's Magical World of Assorted Documents.
Enjoy your stay.

[Image: pezazul.png]

This is my main character, Pezazul. His name means blue fish in latin. I haven't decided much on his backstory apart from the fact he's like Yoshi or Toad, as in he's part of a big race but there is a MAIN one.

[Image: revampoftroyspastpng.png]

This is a revamp of my friend's first custom sprite. The purple legs were just placeholders, don't worry!

[Image: rikon.png]

This is an OLD, OLD fan character I made called Rikon, revamped!

[Image: newsonicedit.png]

This is Ray the Squirrel. That is all.

[Image: tilesetshowoff.png]

Here's a tileset I'm making for my friend's game. This is my main WIP right now, so please comment.
...Critique?

LunchPolice · 07-31-2009, 05:44 AM

I'm pretty sure I'm allowed to double post if I'm updating, so here's an update to my tileset. It's going to be a full tree, not a stump but it isn't finished yet.

[Image: tilesetshowoffj.png]

LunchPolice · 07-31-2009, 06:04 PM

I updated the dirt/sand tile.

LunchPolice · 07-31-2009, 08:14 PM

Did more on the tree. I've never made a tree before - am I on the right track?

Codestar · 07-31-2009, 08:42 PM

you see that little button down there called edit? that's what it's used for.

Other than that I like the mario tiles, yet the rest of your stuff needs a lot of work. You need to learn to hue shift a bit more in your work to give your sprites some depth.

LunchPolice · 07-31-2009, 08:51 PM

(07-31-2009, 08:42 PM)Kaikimi Wrote: you see that little button down there called edit? that's what it's used for.

Other than that I like the mario tiles, yet the rest of your stuff needs a lot of work. You need to learn to hue shift a bit more in your work to give your sprites some depth.

Thanks.
I'm not...quite sure what you mean. Hue Shift?

Raytheon · 07-31-2009, 10:02 PM

http://www.lmgtfy.com/?q=spriting+%2B+hue+shift

LunchPolice · (This post was last modified: 08-01-2009, 12:54 AM by LunchPolice.)

(07-31-2009, 10:02 PM)-The Raytheon Experience- Wrote: http://www.lmgtfy.com/?q=spriting+%2B+hue+shift

Well...that doesn't make me feel stupid at all... Sad

Thanks, though.
[Image: tilesetshowoffh.png]

I'm not that happy with how the tree turned out, but here.

Gors · 08-01-2009, 03:03 PM

it's because the leaf part is small. If you make it bigger and bushier, maybe it'll look good. Also, all your bigger PAs are dirty-looking.

LunchPolice · 08-03-2009, 12:07 AM

Ok, most people (I have this thread on 3 forums) seem to want me to make the bushy part a bit bigger, but I wanted to try with it's current size one more time.
How's this?
[Image: tilesetshowoff.png]

More tree-like?

Raytheon · (This post was last modified: 08-03-2009, 06:47 AM by Raytheon.)

nope, theyre right

make it a bit bigger

i think you should rework your 'main character'

i got really bored of this but i drew a less unbalanced pose really quickly
[Image: icmufp.png]

and try not to use selout on it either

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