The Heart of Sarrador, The Little Flame. Novel in progress

[Alpha Six]

WAIT

SOMEONE WRITING A REAL NARRATIVE

OH MY GOD

I DON'T EVEN CARE IF IT'S GOOD KUDOS TO YOU GOOD SIR.

it's not very good

umm...

Shhhhhhhh.

[Kurai]

"the grunts and moans of men, the screaming of woman and children"

Sexy~

Too bad the rest of it was totally cliche and unreadable. That might have made it a lot better. Try erotic fanfiction next time. Perhaps with dragons too.

Well, I don't write for porn freaks or Mills & Boons fans...
I wan two more opinions at least before I listen to you. No offence, you might be a great guy and all, but yeah... o_O Death and disaster is not sexy...

WAIT

SOMEONE WRITING A REAL NARRATIVE

OH MY GOD

I DON'T EVEN CARE IF IT'S GOOD KUDOS TO YOU GOOD SIR.

it's not very good

umm...

Shhhhhhhh.

Umm...?

[Ravecat]

WAIT

SOMEONE WRITING A REAL NARRATIVE

OH MY GOD

I DON'T EVEN CARE IF IT'S GOOD KUDOS TO YOU GOOD SIR.

it's not very good

umm...

Not exactly an emotion filled opinion rather a statement.