Mabi portrait thing... Not good with names

[soulcaliburfan]

This is the first time I made a pixel art in a long time... This is Nao Mariota Pryderi from a popular mmo named Mabinogi. She is what you would call a spokes-model of the game... Anyway, I was going for a style from a gba game I don't remember too well of an anime I have never seen. So yeah.

[Codestar]

quite the burly arms she's got there... it also needs a gentle slope from the collar from the shoulders.

[GrooveMan.exe]

You'll want to avoid using such large quantities of pure black like that. Work with a dark blue instead, and get some anti-aliasing in there.

[Badassbill]

Not bad, but her arms shouldn't be thicker than her neck.

[soulcaliburfan]

I still haven't gotten this down yet, but I fixed some things... I think >.>

[Baegal]

the hair looks like it has a little too much AA, i think...

[FRET]

I know you're capable of better than this, SCF.

[soulcaliburfan]

I have always sucked at larger sized projects... and if I continue down this road, I will just be complaining, so it doesn't really matter. I really need more practice >.>.