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Trifart
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Hi.

This is an in-work version of my new avatar. It's a creature that I (obviously)
call, a Trifart. It's in four different styles. DP, M&L, KA, and SMW.

Tell me if anything's wrong with it.
-Trifart-

   
This is the slightly up dated one.Smile
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I like the one at the bottom left corner however it's toes seem a bit odd.
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shouldn't this be in sprite discussion?
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Tri, how are we supposed to know if anything's wrong with it? It's your creation, and if you're asking for C&C this would be better moved to sprite discussion.

Though personally, I find it ugly, bland and smacking of unoriginality.But you know what? Lets ask Barg about original concepts.

[Image: bargig8.png]

What's that Mr. Trapazoid with legs? You feel ripped off somebody put a triforce on your head and painted you blue? But I don't see anywhere that's happ- oh.

Not calling you a thief or anything, just pointing out that it should be more interesting and unique or at least STYLIZED for good measures. Hope this has been a learning experience for ya.


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