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#16
12-05-2009, 08:58 AM (This post was last modified: 12-05-2009, 09:06 AM by Baegal.)
Oh, the one on the left isn't the same as the one that I fixed. Sorry!
For the one on the right, where could I add more AA?
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12-05-2009, 04:12 PM (This post was last modified: 12-05-2009, 04:15 PM by Baegal.)
Now, skull! [Image: Skullforsig12.png](the one in purple)

Also, I know there are two of the person in blue. One is a different form. The one with the halo should be floating.
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#18
12-06-2009, 09:15 AM (This post was last modified: 12-06-2009, 09:16 AM by Baegal.)
I know I'm posting a lot, but I need critique before I can move on.
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#19
12-06-2009, 04:42 PM
Hey, that's Reborn.
Never got past the first chapter, but I've seen that blue guy before and it looks pretty good.
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#20
12-06-2009, 07:43 PM
Oh, you know!
You should continue. It's really good. Are the actual sprites okay?
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#21
12-06-2009, 07:50 PM
From knowing nothing about what happens after chapter 1 (though I've heard it gets more violent later in the series) I don't know who those characters are. But from a spriting perspective, they look good.
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#22
12-06-2009, 08:27 PM
Not too violent, really no one dies in the series, and really only blood in the beginning.
On topic: I'm going to maybe start others soon.
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#23
12-06-2009, 09:37 PM
Eh. I wouldn't say there's no blood in Reborn, but there's limited amount compared to some others. Either way, good series. Sprites look good, btw.
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#24
12-15-2009, 06:29 PM (This post was last modified: 12-15-2009, 06:30 PM by Baegal.)
I added some back poses for the first four

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also do you think I fixed the face on the one with yellow hair?
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#25
12-15-2009, 06:50 PM
It's ALOT better. Nice sprites, btw.
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#26
12-15-2009, 07:49 PM
thank you. Eyes don't look odd to you? They were really bothering me
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#27
12-15-2009, 08:31 PM
I think it may be the outlining that's bothering you. Other than that, nothing wrong that I see.
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