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#46
08-25-2009, 06:40 AM
(08-23-2009, 11:49 AM)Kirbyfan Wrote:
(08-22-2009, 12:50 PM)Rags Wrote: Is it just me, or is his head TOO round?

Well, it is a helmet. They're often very round.

He's obviously talking about the lower part because it seems Captain Falcon is a child with no jaw.
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08-25-2009, 10:03 AM
Now that you mention it, maybe the jaw could use some squaring off. It's not of dire importance, but I'd like to see how it would look.
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#48
08-29-2009, 01:35 PM
Sorry to keep you waiting for so long. I was quite lazy lately, but I have worked at least a bit on Falcon. Little progress is better than none, isn't it?

I gave Falcon a proper jaw, the new head looks much better.
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Here's the rest of the sheet, including some new alternative colors.
Ignore the pink version, it looks awful. Trying to make it tomorrow.
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#49
08-29-2009, 01:40 PM
Looks pretty good and accurate so far. I look forward to seeing some of his attacks.

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#50
08-30-2009, 10:29 AM
Oh, man. This is looking great!
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#51
10-26-2009, 03:40 AM
I think that we should take advantage of the new style to put some size and shape into the humans heads. If we're going for a slightly more cartoony look anyways we might as well make the heads a little bigger; that way we can also fit some detail into them.

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I attempted Falcon (and helmetless Falcon as it seems to be the best choice for an alt costume for him)
I obviously only did the heads; the bodys are just the one from the line up stretched out 115% to make them the right size for the new style - to try out the size of the heads and what not.
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#52
10-26-2009, 04:06 AM
I get what you were trying to do with the head, but it doesn't look right. Especially the chin.


I'm going to try and edit it a bit.
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#53
10-26-2009, 04:07 AM
As-is, his head looks too big. His jaw reminds me of "Brawl in the Family." Finish the body and we can see where we're going with it and if we like it.
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#54
10-26-2009, 07:47 AM
yeah, it just looks goofy. I know the style is cartoony but thats too much
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01-01-2010, 03:10 PM
Hey guys, long time no see. Happy new year, everyone.

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#56
01-01-2010, 04:02 PM
its a good start but it def. needs work
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#57
01-02-2010, 01:45 PM
I guess you're right. Right now I try to redo the head.
Could you please be more specific about what I should change apart from that?
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#58
01-02-2010, 01:48 PM
his pose. It looks very unnatural
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01-02-2010, 03:04 PM (This post was last modified: 01-02-2010, 03:05 PM by Kirbyfan.)
His arm that is extending outwards should be more tucked in.
I don't really like the color choice.

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#60
01-04-2010, 02:20 PM
Wow, it's kinda funny how obvious the previous flaws are after redoing the sprite. Thanks for the advice.
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- new head
- tried to fix the stace by editing the legs

about the color choice: Well, I wasn't sure if I could take different colors than the ones from the "official" palette.
about his front arm: During the idle stance, the arm will change anyway, so I just kept this one for now.
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