Have a rotten day

[Neslug]

It's no Starpower, but I think it still looks okay. Any crits?

[Davy Jones]

Smile and eyes looking forced and rigid + I think he has pupils.

The body itself is good.

[Neslug]

I always thought Wario's face looked forced and rigid anyway, but I'll see what I can do. But his eyes are just small black dots. Here's an alternative version with different eyes:


Body is still very much a work-in-progress until I can get it to look right.

[Jdaster64]

The eyes still give that "forced" look (I actually prefer the former to its edit), but the smile itself and the body are great. Try shrinking his eyes in the vertical direction, I think that's where the problem is.

[Neslug]

Thank you Daster, I think the face's about nailed now.

[Jovian-12]

his..erm...crotch looks a little lumpy...compared to the shading of his belly near his legs. doesn't quite match up and makes him look doughy.

[Neslug]

Doughy? But that's perfectly rotten for Wario.



Now that I'm back on my own computer, I fixed the overalls colour and tried animating.

Supposed to be in style with:

[Ton]

You managed to get the face looking good. He looked like he was hopped up on something in the first post. Great job.

[Marth]

Body is great, but the face is just... well not very wario like. Looks fake happy, not synically happy. Maybe make the eyebrows ina more aggrivated fashion?

[Neslug]

He isn't supposed to look angry, just mischievous. I think the eyebrows are fine now.

[Gors]

The arms could move more, and the W-mark on his glove should shrink when his hands go back.

[ZX0]

The way his eye brows move make him look like a pedo.

[Woppet*]

I like it a lot.