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WIP and thus still needs animation, but I have the first frame done and wanted to know what you guys think of it so far.
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Mostly I'm wondering if everything is readable. (To me it is, but then again it's my design so of course I would know what's supposed to be what.)
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What's the PJ's challenge about? (I'm assuming you can use only two colors)

I think it's fairly readable, just her left ponytail is strange; it doesn't balance out with the right ponytail (unless that's your goal).
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Pixel Art Challenge: Black and White Sprite

This week we want you to make an animated sprite of an original character using just black, white and transparency.

Update: Please make sure your entry is a full sprite of your character. This is not a portrait challenge.

Canvas Size - Max 80 x 80.
Colours - Exactly 3. You must only use pure black (#000000), pure white (#ffffff) and transparency.
Transparency - Required.
Animation - Required. Min 4 frames.



The challenge thread will have all the challenge updates. The thread is also a great place to post your WIPs.
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#4
thanks for the info

then, you need to touch up those ponytails and you're off to go, I think.
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#5
So far, it's a top contender. Smile

Looks really nice. I suggest animating it, though, it's begging for swaying hair.
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#6
Thanks, guys. :>
It is gonna be animated, since it has to be in order to be entered in, and that's basically what I was planning to do with the animation, have her hair and skirt and all that blow around a bit. (Since I can't do complex animations at all.)
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Better job on the ponytail?
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personally i would use less details on the dress to increase readbility, but thats just me.
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#8
Well it's great buy I just see two problems with it.

First This may just be me, but the right leg/ ankle is in an odd position, as the the leg appears to go out yet the ankle goes in

second the right arm is hard to read, but then again, it's almost impossible to do with black and white

good job though
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