I find PM a fun style, and im having success with it recently, so I decided to do this PM style Eerie, C+C Please,
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Paper Mario Eerie
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08-10-2008, 07:05 PM
Not bad. I don't think the edge of the mouth should touch the arm.
08-10-2008, 07:10 PM
the body should be a little less... fat... and the nose/snout/mouth thing should be a little bigger. It looks like they're one and the same.
(08-10-2008, 07:05 PM)gangster guy Wrote: Not bad. I don't think the edge of the mouth should touch the arm.Thanks, but actually yes, because if you look at the SMW Eerie, it touches http://www.mariowiki.com/Eerie EDIT: Fixed, I made the body a little smaller, rounded out the nose, but the eyes are the right size,
08-10-2008, 07:26 PM
(08-10-2008, 07:18 PM)CoolYoshi Wrote:You should not use SMW sprites as reference :X(08-10-2008, 07:05 PM)gangster guy Wrote: Not bad. I don't think the edge of the mouth should touch the arm.Thanks, but actually yes, because if you look at the SMW Eerie, it touches http://www.mariowiki.com/Eerie (08-10-2008, 07:26 PM)Solink Wrote:Well it has to look like it is supposed to, that is the only REF I have, and I fixed more,(08-10-2008, 07:18 PM)CoolYoshi Wrote:You should not use SMW sprites as reference :X(08-10-2008, 07:05 PM)gangster guy Wrote: Not bad. I don't think the edge of the mouth should touch the arm.Thanks, but actually yes, because if you look at the SMW Eerie, it touches http://www.mariowiki.com/Eerie
08-10-2008, 07:50 PM
It should look like It's sticking it's arms out, like a zombie.
08-10-2008, 08:06 PM
08-10-2008, 08:24 PM
i think the tail should be a bit bigger
08-10-2008, 08:31 PM
08-10-2008, 08:34 PM
08-10-2008, 08:37 PM
08-11-2008, 01:30 AM
It fits the style pretty well. However, his head seems to be facing a different direction from his body. Maybe make his underbelly more round?
BTW, I think Eerie is supposed to be a dinosaur ghost; it is on Dinosaur Island, after all...
08-11-2008, 02:00 AM
Put less shading on the blue part
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