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C+C Please
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#2
How would you tell what Pikmin is what color?
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#3
uh

those are bad

Pikmin shouldn't be covered by its flower; make it show some of his body parts. Also, don't use MS Paint circle tools because it doesn't make symmetrical circles.

The colors are too MS Paint default, you gradient-shaded, not too interesting.
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#4
those where just the flowers, not the pikmin, and there not defult, I made them darker, or lighter. but i'll work on them anyway
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#5
making default colors lighter or darker is still bad

use custom colors

also, make the flowers smaller, even if it's not accurate. It'll increase the sprite's readability
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#6
Are you Pikmin Awsomeness?
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#7
No, I think he Actually did gorsals cc and i only see one topic soooooo....

It's not PA
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#9
PA misspells and this seems like his subject matter. The fact he took a crit confounds me though. Just sayin.
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#10
he did it so we would be convinced he's someone else

now that he's taken a crit he is free to continue ignoring everyone forever
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#11
the flowers should be back more. they're not entirely straight up; the antenna arches backward and the flowers are more sideways-ish due to the angle. I mean, you obviously have knowledge of how this should work, considering how you've made Olimar and Louie's antennas.

also, you have the petals as one big mush. no. petals are individual segments.
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#12
They're not the same person, the IPs don't match. No more discussion on that.

Like everybody else said, you need a better palette.
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