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#856
03-23-2010, 05:34 PM
There good, but i prefer the old one.
Buts that's just my opinion.
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#857
03-23-2010, 06:01 PM
I really like the new one more.
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#858
03-23-2010, 06:30 PM
[Image: wingull.png]

I think the wings look like they're not in the same perspective with the body, so I did a little redlining on the last one. Should give an idea what to fix.

Also the tail feathers could be a little lower down on the first two frames, as its body is turning during the gliding.
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#859
03-23-2010, 07:24 PM
Ah, I see what you mean!

I'll fix those two poses wings soon...I don't know why the Wings are giving me so much trouble (I think it's because I couldn't find a good reference for the angle I was working with)
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#860
03-24-2010, 01:40 PM (This post was last modified: 03-24-2010, 01:41 PM by JoshR691.)
I think I got it now:

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#861
03-24-2010, 02:03 PM
While that one pose looks a little better, this is what I meant.

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(The wings are too short in the one I drew, but you get the point, the wings should be sticking straight out of Wingull's sides and not reach too far horizontally)
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#862
03-24-2010, 02:16 PM
That's exactly what I originally set out to do, but I couldn't find a good reference of him sideways like that...

...Are his wings like that though? I always thought they were...'sharp' at the ends

Anyway, I'll see what I can do (Hopefully I can get them to look right)
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#863
03-24-2010, 02:25 PM
Yes they're sharper at the ends, but it was just a quick sketch.
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#864
03-24-2010, 02:47 PM (This post was last modified: 03-24-2010, 02:49 PM by JoshR691.)
Forgot to say this in my last post, but is it just the Idle that needs to be fixed, or is it the entire sheet? And, if it's the entire sheet, should I get rid of the Flapping?
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#865
03-24-2010, 02:49 PM
Well it's most visible on the idle so that's why I suggested it. Up to you for the rest.
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#866
03-25-2010, 12:52 PM
Alright, took me a while, but I think it's fixed now:

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#867
03-25-2010, 01:28 PM
Much better!!!!
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#868
03-26-2010, 04:45 PM
Well, I'm going to start Tyrogue soon, would you rather see his Idle with his guard up (like Hitmonchan) or just kind of standing normally (Arms at side, like Mystery Dungeon, or Ranger: Shadows of Almia)
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#869
03-26-2010, 04:56 PM
I'd say have his arms at the side.
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#870
03-26-2010, 08:25 PM
could it not be arms at the side change to guard and back. Or is that to much messing about?
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