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03-25-2010, 06:04 PM
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I got in touch with an old friend of mine who is now making indie games for cash and he was interested in my hammer game idea.. wait, did I already tell you guys that? Well anyways, it'll be a few weeks till we can start on anything series, so in the mean time, I'm thinking about trying some different styles for fun.
This one is obviously still a WIP, but I like the general idea and the larger size.
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Ah, that looks a lot better. It's much more stylistic and the larger outline seems to give it a cleaner effect. Good work.
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(03-25-2010, 06:57 PM)Dex Wrote: Ah, that looks a lot better. It's much more stylistic and the larger outline seems to give it a cleaner effect. Good work. Thanks. I'm going to rethink the colors a bit since this one is more cartoony and should probably have more cheerful colors.
OH GOD THE THANK BUTTON IS BACK
the bigger sprite is hella nice c:
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(03-25-2010, 07:53 PM)Chaoxys Wrote: (03-25-2010, 06:57 PM)Dex Wrote: Ah, that looks a lot better. It's much more stylistic and the larger outline seems to give it a cleaner effect. Good work. Thanks. I'm going to rethink the colors a bit since this one is more cartoony and should probably have more cheerful colors.
Well, the only color I think you should change is the dark blue of the helmet to the same black of the T-shirt.
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Well, l already changed the hat's colors, but then the pants colors looked too dark so I made them more red and it actually looked nice.
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03-27-2010, 10:42 PM
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FFFFFFF Ignore her body I'm still working on it. I made her boobs too big... again. That and the body as a whole sucks as of right now. just C+C on the head please.
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the boy looked better when he had angry eyes- at the top of the page
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03-29-2010, 09:24 AM
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Not sure how to respond to that aside from, sorry for making him with more than one emotion?
(03-27-2010, 10:42 PM)Chaoxys Wrote:
FFFFFFF Ignore her body I'm still working on it. I made her boobs too big... again. That and the body as a whole sucks as of right now. just C+C on the head please.
this is adorable, but the tits are way too big again
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She basically has no neck, and her head is too far on the right
Her eyes are quite hard to read at 1x
made an edit, hope you don't mind
Tried to fix what I said before plus some other stuff, like changing the shape of her head slightly to make it feel more feminine
I also changed the color of her hair because I actually liked it the way you had it on the smaller version
hope this is somewhat helpful, if not, just ignore me
I'm going to jump in this bandwagon and edit her a little bit
I didn't think Vic's mouth wasn't that good so I tried my hand at it. not really sure about my version too
also, I reduced her tits again and gave her wristbands
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(03-29-2010, 10:14 AM)*Gorsal* Wrote: I'm going to jump in this bandwagon and edit her a little bit
I didn't think Vic's mouth wasn't that good so I tried my hand at it. not really sure about my version too
also, I reduced her tits again and gave her wristbands
I like that, although I want to make a few changes.
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I like the new style, it shows more of the character then it was before
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glub glub
I still need to make designs for the main bad guy and the main characters rival.
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