Whoa, good job! But honestly, there are some parts that need improvement (sorry if I couldn't say it before, I was on a hurry). For example:
Running animation: I think you should make the arms a bit more straight (like the SMW one, so it looks like he's running very fast). Also, gluing the walking legs in a different position doesn't make it good, too. Look the last running frame: Mario looks skinny as hell. You need to make his size constant.
Swimming animation: The way Mario bends the leg is impossible: you must make it more aerodinamic (check the SMW swimming animation for a good ref.) Also, his body could be bending a bit (maybe 1 px) to make it move a bit. Swimming with your body staying still is impossible
And you didn't fix his butt in the ground pound but yeah, I can wait
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To be honest I don't see a thing wrong with the walking, it looks great animated an in-game, so I'll probably leave that be. The swimming isn't nearly finished, I haven't even started it actually, that's just wading. I'm probably gonna turn to SMG or some other game and check out how Mario swims.
As for the ground pound...we'll see. :]
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once your done with mario can i use him for a game?,super mario bros 3 remake!(or just super mario bros 1 or 2 remake idk gotta decide)
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THIS WILL GET UPDATED WITH ALL MY STUFF SOON ^^^
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update
Boo Mario
WIP Boo
WIP Luigi
Not a fan of Boo-Mario's tongue, but the rest is awesome.
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I agree with Ton. Plus, I don't think Boo Mario looks that angry.
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Umm, I don't really see how I could make him any angrier unless I effed with the eyes, and I don't want to make them unreadable.
Also thanks Ton, and I'll work on the tounge I guess.
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Correct me if I'm wrong, but I don't think Boo Mario has an angry expression on his face.
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He looks angry to me, it's just the tongue/mouth that make him look weird, I think.
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plz dont give me a bad point plz for sounding a bit gay here
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Not that angry
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Whatever, I'll see what I can do to BM.
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yeah, Boo Mario looks too angry and his tongue is too big.
Luigi looks incredible, though! Keep it up!
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I had 222 posts before this.
Anyways, thanks for the comments.
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Hurry up and update on both of them.
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(10-19-2008, 09:01 AM)DVB Wrote: Hurry up and update on both of them. Do you even understand anything? DON'T BUMP OLD TOPICS! And also don't nag him to update them, he has other stuff hes working on as well.
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